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Rapture

drifting past the isle on sapphire seas like warm silk my heart dreams of you moonfaced in rapture roiling your nether world edged onyx part the limbs of land breech the shores of lunar orbs rest the lance dear one upon the sole opal pearl climax with earthly delight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/10/2012 1:31:00 PM
Debbie, congrats on your win with this lovely piece. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:10:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/9/2012 12:20:00 PM
Congrats on a lovely write!!!!
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Date: 4/7/2012 11:33:00 PM
An awesome write!Congratulations Debi.
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Date: 4/7/2012 10:47:00 AM
Beautiful Deb !!! Congrats.
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Date: 4/7/2012 9:15:00 AM
the words just flow and bring beauty and peace to the reader. congratulations.
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Date: 4/7/2012 3:15:00 AM
Words of elegance rolling from your tongue! Powerful piece! Part the limbs of land....wow! Congrats. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2011 9:00:00 AM
Now that's what I'm talkin about!!! A great write Debbie. Congratulations
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:52:00 AM
Congratulation on your fantastic win,my friend. bl
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Date: 11/29/2011 5:08:00 AM
Debbie, I'm not old enough to read this so I only did twice.
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:19:00 PM
ooh lala, Debs, an erotic moon poem. VEry nice.
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Date: 11/28/2011 8:44:00 PM
always a pleasure to read D.G., please check my late post.. and send me mail.. so i can correct my haiku...please..please..! hugs to you...p.d.
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Date: 11/28/2011 7:01:00 PM
__/\__ (Namaste)~Very nice~
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