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Rape and Abuse

Cries for help went awry , anguish and pain went in vain lost battle of life before a coward. Groping and forcing on a girl does not make a man strong just proves that he is a beast, and unfit to be among people. Taking away a girl's modesty is not a most heroic act but a heinous crime which even ferocious beast would not have. Curse the moment when these sick are born with lust all the time. Even girls are afraid to be mothers,raise kids like these. The power of a man lies in character and heart but not in sexual supremacy or desires. (Dedicated to Nirbhaya,who was brutally raped and died fighting for her life.And all those who have been victims.Let's raise our standards and respect women everywhere ,without her there is no world.)

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/9/2017 6:01:00 AM

A very dad poem, yeah it s true that their are beast in this world, who think this to be a strong act, but they are worse, they humilate someone who s weak who can t defend herself, may God destroy them, they ruined the life of a stranger however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Kenisha Shines
Date: 6/16/2017 12:31:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading the poem and sharing your opinion.would love to read your work .have a great day!:)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/23/2014 6:10:00 AM

Sad and powerful. Definitely a winner. Congrats on your placement in the contest.

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/24/2014 12:41:00 AM

thank you so much

Archana Garg

Date: 4/21/2014 11:39:00 PM

Oooh, I see this was a winner congrats, Kenisha.

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/22/2014 4:41:00 AM

thank you so mcuh :).have a great day.

Seren Roberts

Date: 4/21/2014 10:28:00 PM

Congrats Kenisha, sorry to see this disease of pain inflicting is world wide ....the victim often thinks she is alone . .Seren

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/22/2014 4:40:00 AM

thank you so much for reading.yes,the survivor is victimised more than the culprit.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2014 6:40:00 PM

Kenisha, , Loved how you extracted this one away. Congratulations, this is a great win, for such a painful and realistic theme, when writing about this topic, In which phantom's around Abused Women. Have a nice day:) ~LINDA

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/22/2014 4:38:00 AM

thank you so much :).its very sad ordeal which many women face and go through.hope that this abuse ends forever.

Joe Flach

Date: 4/21/2014 4:56:00 PM

Thank you for entering the contest, Kenisha and congratulations on your placement. A very sad and too-often told tale. I loved your line: "Groping and forcing on a girl does not make a man strong just proves that he is a beast." Actually, it is the weak and cowards of our gender who become the abusers. The courageous are those like you who speak out against it. Thanks. Joe

Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/22/2014 4:35:00 AM

Thank you so much for appreciating my work and made me a winner.:)

Archana Garg

Date: 3/7/2014 10:25:00 AM

"You touched my soul Kenisha. Its been more than a year and the odd story continues. No one knows why these things happen.Praying for a better tomorrow."

Kenisha Shines
Date: 3/8/2014 8:08:00 AM

thank you so much for reading.Its sad that this still continues ,hope good days come along .

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/26/2013 4:34:00 AM

A sad one Kenisha,so sorry for the loss of your friend. My close friend was raped recently...last week. I dedicated one of my poems to her. Welcome to poetrysoup dear one. Love and hugs, Bob-based on belief.

Kenisha Shines
Date: 10/27/2013 10:32:00 AM

thank you so much for reading and i wish your friend overcomes that and may god give her the strength.

Karishma Jaisingh

Date: 5/12/2013 12:01:00 AM

good selection of topic. Its sad it's still left undecided though.

Kenisha Shines
Date: 5/12/2013 3:26:00 AM

thank you and its very sad that this heinous crime rate is increasing.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2013 1:47:00 PM

Yes only good Mothers can raise good son. Light & Love

Kenisha Shines
Date: 3/8/2013 3:20:00 AM

yes very true and thank you so much for the comment

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/4/2013 9:36:00 AM

whilst there are human beings, male and female such beastly acts will happen. Such is the world today. Well written poem. Seren

Kenisha Shines
Date: 2/4/2013 10:44:00 PM

thank you for your words.

Richard Palmer

Date: 2/2/2013 7:26:00 AM

sad,heart felt,rape is a world crime,all we soupers should write about this topic and make a statement to these sick men and women,wonderful write Kenisha

Kenisha Shines
Date: 2/3/2013 6:47:00 AM

thank you for your words and support.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 2/2/2013 12:44:00 AM

Thnx Kenisha for your poem and comments!! Jag

Kamal Raj Dahal

Date: 1/28/2013 2:21:00 AM

Dear Kenisha You have written very nice poem with alerting these vulnerable males of society who do not know the value of human life. Very good writing. Thank you.

Kenisha Shines
Date: 1/28/2013 6:22:00 AM

thank you so much.hope that people realise the value of human life.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2013 8:29:00 PM

kenisha shines, this is a sad but well done dedication...this topic is very hard for me... thank you for sharing the power behind your pen...PD

Kenisha Shines
Date: 1/28/2013 2:00:00 AM

thank you so much.

Goldie Uttamchandani

Date: 1/25/2013 7:12:00 AM

Im so moved by your poem... it's truly captivated the horror and pain of the act. Also thank you for enjoying Myday (one of my poems you commented on)

Kenisha Shines
Date: 1/26/2013 6:35:00 AM

thank you so much .