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Ranting and Writing

Anger spills out with a great shout from this pen at times as it looks for rhymes that make some sense without pretense, but its only anger that spills and my heart it fills for the madness in a life full of war, ever in strife. While loving words may be said, deeds leave only more dead either in a war a world away or drunks out on the highway its ever decay and death leaving anger on my breath. Its a new year and a new day, wish it truly felt that way but for some UnGodly reason only a rage pen writes the season.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/4/2010 3:19:00 PM
Yes poets send messages with anger as well as all of the other emotions. Interesting slant. Thak you for your comment on my poem "What pain". I wrote that ten years ago this next month, shortly after my adult son died. He was my only son and a joy to raise.That was one of the first poems I ever wrote and I have been writing only since that time. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/3/2010 3:05:00 PM
Anger serves a worthy purpose sometimes especially when it comes to telling it like it is. Nothing like a rebel with a cause in my book!! Thanks for your welcome comment on Intuitive Eyes. I will have to look up Marcus you have me intrigued! smile.....Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:30:00 PM
WOW You go girl. You hit the nail right on the head Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:34:00 AM
I know what you mean sometimes. Nice write, very clever.
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Date: 1/1/2010 11:29:00 PM
You have described the universal in the particular..well done!
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Date: 1/1/2010 9:33:00 PM
In a world such as ours, Sue, you'd have to be living in a bubble not to feel this way. Great job, well-written! Peace and love, Audrey Happy 2010!
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Date: 1/1/2010 3:17:00 PM
Get it out and if you have to throw it away. This was a great write on something that we all face. They say that there only two emotions fear and love. Jesus said that perfect love casteth out all fear. So if there is anger there is fear in there somewhere. We just have to find out where it lies. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/1/2010 2:23:00 PM
great poem, My anger got the best of me today. Poetry does help to vent at least for me. thanks for a poem to help me see my mischief.
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