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Ransom Note

RANSOM NOTE A stark white note left on the front door, Bright red droplets of blood on the floor, Dear God, let my niece and child be alive, Please, please let them survive! I am told do not to call in the police, Lest they take revenge and their patience cease, But I have no option, I must, True story of this kidnap is lust, Money they want, I want my children and peace, I want my children back, please! I sit anxiously and terrified by the phone, I’m so exhausted I fall asleep all alone Waiting to hear good news, And praying the situation will defuse. I’m frozen with fear to my very core, But suddenly hear voices, and a knock on my door, With trepidation I open, there stand the police, With two wide eyed children, my son and my niece, They look battered, a young girl and a small boy, I couldn’t contain my tears and ecstatic joy, As I engulf them in a hug, dear God, they’re alive, You made sure, that you helped them survive! The wicket culprits were arrested in a dark lane, Inflicting petrified children with unthinkable strain, My life no longer seemed senseless and black, For I had my purpose for life back! Justice and the long arm of the law had won, The greatest joy for a mother, under the sun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/8/2019 2:26:00 PM
Hello Jennifer,yes that is a great mother .Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:43:00 AM
Hi Darlene, Sorry I somehow missed this comment - thank you very much - no greater than a mother's love! Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Date: 2/15/2019 10:29:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, this is an excellent poetic tale from your pen. You take us along on a roller-coaster ride of emotion. I was taken right to the heart of this thriller. I enjoyed the ride. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/15/2019 10:58:00 AM
A thriller but thank goodness only fiction. Kidnapping happens universally and can culminate with tragedy and certainly fear during this ghastly ordeal - Thank you for your kind comments Mike, so sweet of you! Poetry hugs
Date: 2/8/2019 5:50:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … I hope in your case, this is fiction. I can't imagine the trauma a family goes through when unpredictable criminals without morals strike fear into innocent parents - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 2/8/2019 11:36:00 PM
Yes it absolutely is Lindsay, but I had been watching a thriller where two children were kidnapped and thus it gave rise to my idea of writing this poem - a horrific experience for parents! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/8/2019 2:12:00 PM
You took us along with you through two vividly contrasting parts, Jenny...fear and anxiety followed by ecstatic joy. Well done! Warm regards // paul
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Date: 2/8/2019 2:25:00 PM
We had just watched a similar movie - I honestly almost lived my poem! thank-you for your comment Paul. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/7/2019 1:18:00 PM
- Think it must be the worst a mother or father can experience - A horrible nightmare, Jennifer - An excellent poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/8/2019 12:33:00 PM
Thank-you Sunshine Smile - it is a parents worst nightmare - a really lovely comment! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/7/2019 5:45:00 AM
Oh what a serious topic and you wrote it so poeticallly expressing the panic a loved one would feel.. Brilliant poem Jennifer..
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Date: 2/7/2019 8:38:00 AM
Hi SO, I love watching thriller movies. Saw one a few days ago on TV, and thought it would make a thrilling poem! Thank-you for a great comment. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 2/6/2019 3:09:00 AM
Your wonderful pen, with its poetic flair, is dipped into mundane concerns and struggles! Your scent of Beauty is filling your avid reader's heart and soul.. No wonder from a soul sister who always steps in to lend a warm heart and a knowledgeable soul! A brilliant real world work! dearest Jennifer. A great pleasure to read! In my fave list.. love and hugs. God bless you.
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Date: 2/6/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thank-you dearest Besma - children and adults are kidnapped and held and bullied and often tortured and all for the devils money! We all need money to live, but why can't the world return to the reciprocal system - how kinder we would all be. I am so proud to call you my soul sister! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/6/2019 2:22:00 AM
A tragic verse Jennifer , but a very happy emotional ending. Tom.
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Date: 2/6/2019 12:39:00 PM
We had just finished watching a film where two children were kidnapped and frighteningly held for a huge ransom but the bad guys died at the end. I immediately sat a wrote my poem - glad you enjoyed Tom. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/5/2019 6:41:00 PM
Well caught, but spare a thought for the THOUSANDS of mothers who will not see their kidnapped child again because Trump insists it would be "harmful" to the children to be reunited with their mother and family! Wouldn't Trump be shocked to discover Africa is more civilised than the USA? Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/6/2019 12:32:00 PM
Trump is a breed all of his own! What he has done to families is unforgivable, but I believe in Karma , he must always look behind him! Thank-you for your pertinent comment Rico, Poetry hugs and Yasou, Jennifer.
Date: 2/5/2019 2:17:00 PM
Such a fine piece Jennifer, full of great imagery and line of thought. Have a blessed day,Gordon
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Date: 2/6/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank-you Gordon, that very sweet of you to say so! Thank-goodness it was imagery only. Be blessed also Gordon, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/5/2019 12:08:00 PM
Jennifer! Fantastic Poem..one of the best I have read. You captured agony, joy, and gratitude, all in a short space of time. Amazing! Best to you Panagiota
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Date: 2/5/2019 12:30:00 PM
Hi Panagiota, what a wonderful comment and compliment - thank you so much - am about to visit your page. By the way are you perhaps Greek - I am half Greek. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

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