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Randomling One and Randomling Two

Autumn Does Come Randomling One A crispness stirs in early morn From dewdrops that overnight were born. On autumn's air There lingers sounds of leaves summer worn. Rustling dried shucks 'pon summer's corn Dance with a flair The Autumn Of Our Life Randomling Two In this autumn of our years Let's enjoy life and revere Live for God, mate, and then self Encourage, support, shoo all fears In this slow sunset of our years Let love be in itself Form: Rime Coue'e Inspired by Mary Oliver Rotman's contest.. in itself means alone/ let love stand alone Written: August 10, 2015

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Date: 8/19/2015 3:08:00 PM
These are both beautiful, Sara. Hopefully they are for the contest...can visualize them on the winners' list:) // paul
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Date: 8/11/2015 11:21:00 AM
very creative, sara.. haven't tried this yet and your string of randomlings is a gem.. delighted!.. huggs
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:34:00 PM
G'day Sara... I certainly enjoyed your ramdomling autumn verses Sara describing how similar our lives are to the time of autumn - Lindsay
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:30:00 PM
Sara, BEAUTIFUL AND BEAUTIFUL, Randomlings for the contest, a dancing 7 and thanks for visiting my ravaged poem
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Date: 8/10/2015 5:23:00 PM
Wow!!! What an intriguing piece, I love it lol!!!......Excellence........A.M.
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Date: 8/10/2015 3:29:00 PM
you are really gearing up for fall, I see. Great idea to do two on this topic, Sara.
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Date: 8/10/2015 11:13:00 AM
these are both very beautiful Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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