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Random Thoughts *31* Double Acrostic To Rictameter

Double Acrostic to Rictameter: The conclusion of my "Image" series Mit Wobet... *******Double Acrostic******* Malicious magician, with a condescending Intuition> smooth, alluring with Tenacious passion.> supremely menacing. Warden of your soul> life, his Occupation> dedication in this role> a Beast wrapped in human flesh, mingling. Euphoria his weapon, seductive, spine Tingling, demonic soldier. *********Rictameter********** ******2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2******* Demon, hidden inside complicating the mind. ****of kind, Monica McMichael. that is when she wakes in the padded room, breaking free of satans wrinkle. ******alone in real time. still inside, her Demon. *******Free-verse******* A voice emerges through the silence and gets louder with every second. Little bumps form on her arms, chills shoot through her spine.. She looks in the mirror only to find[reflecting back] a handsome man, a smooth and charming guy.. dressed in black, hair slicked back, wearing a red bow tie... Jared Pickett 11/10/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 12/17/2009 10:22:00 AM
An awesome conclusion to your "Image" series...not exactly what I would have expected but superb nonetheless...held me captive from the beginning to end...masterful job! Thanks so much for sharing...have a great day~Mary
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Date: 11/12/2009 8:22:00 PM
For Random thoughts, they are surrounding a particular theme in the form of a demonic character. Does the mirror reflects who the person really is here? Or is possession of a confused soul? Thought provoking poem with striking imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem. Please read more any time.
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:36:00 AM
you know I read this again and i'm not sure if 'he' is the hidden inside of 'her'... I will read again later also...wonderful images, amazing writing my friend.
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:20:00 AM
wow! dressed in black and hair slicked back, my MiB (Men in Black, movie), has a red bow tie! I love these writes! :) Hugs and thanks for visiting my new stuff, means a lot to me that you enjoy it :)
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Date: 11/11/2009 5:23:00 PM
wild poems here, nice for horror
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Date: 11/10/2009 1:02:00 PM
goodness..a movie plot! scarey WOWSER! Light & Love
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