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Time has weathered its walls, and nature has claimed it as its own, with vines and foliage covering every surface as if foraging for room. The air is thick with a sense of dejic-mystery and significance depicted overtly by the castle's towering entrance. There are tales and tall tales that surround this place, that ignite one's curiosity even further. If you get the right traveler and enough ale. But never had any of them acquired the knowledge of it's location. Most of them even ending their accounts with, "but all of it but a myth", or it's equivalent. Is this overgrown castle, that whispers of it's readiness to divulge its secrets and echoes that have been shaded within its walls and forgotten by Time, playing with the imagination or siring a confidant, a worker of its magics. Graft appeared as a small child in contrast as he pushed open the Great doors. They let out a great shriek from age and unuse, sounding much like a Vulcarn ready to dive, giving battle cry as the last thing one would hear before the black...

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Date: 1/24/2024 9:41:00 AM
Hey Jude, I like how your poem navigates between the realms of reality and imagination, leaving the reader to ponder whether the overgrown castle is a mere figment of the mind or a magical entity playing with the imagination. The blend of vivid imagery, mysterious atmosphere, and the introduction of a central character propels the narrative forward, inviting readers to embark on a journey where reality and fantasy intertwine...
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:38:00 AM
Quite intriguing. One can't help but wonder what secrets might be uncovered
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Date: 1/24/2024 3:48:00 AM
What a deep write, i read it twice to divein deep and grasp the details of the imagery youv painted in such eloquence. I especially love the opening, as through your words i can see vines and foliage covering branches etc. and time how it fleet . Love this soulful write. Always a pleasure reading your work
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