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A crazy old man once told me, “Heaven is made of the things you give away.” It appeared he was next in line for heaven as he had next to nothing left to give. We shared a cup of coffee, conversation, well not so much conversation as a gentle walk through a magical forest. His voice had not grown old or weary of his quest to share his experience. He stooped to pick up a napkin discarded in haste, tucked it in his pocket as we walked. He shared his muffin, spoke with a woman pushing a shopping cart through the Common. She walked away smiling. The muffin crumbs he left for the birds. He nodded to the homeless, waved to strangers, petted stray dogs, offering all the brightness of his being, warmth of his eyes, quizzical wrinkle of his grin. His rambling soliloquy poked sticks at the universe, offered hope to the ducklings… yeah … the ducklings followed him as if they knew that he knew. As we approached the starting point of both walk and oration he spoke of the completed circle – not the circumference - but the center, said that the achievement was not in amassing things to give away but to offer freely those things that you always have. Time, he said, is huge, as is a smile, a word, a shared muffin, a moment in the passing of an eon. He left me sitting on a park bench sharing muffin crumbs and smiling. 1/25/2017 submitted to – Random Acts of Kindness – Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/6/2019 8:57:00 AM
Beautiful! Thoroughly pleased with this wonderful poem on kindness.
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Date: 2/20/2017 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations John!
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Date: 2/17/2017 4:22:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your trophy win, John:) I'm very glad this won:) it had to:)
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Date: 2/16/2017 2:58:00 AM
That is great. Congratulations John.
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Date: 2/15/2017 11:11:00 PM
Such a nice combination of events; congratulation on your piece and on your placement in the contest. Well-done, John
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:42:00 AM
A beautiful lesson, congratulations John...
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Date: 2/15/2017 12:41:00 AM
Congratulaions on your 1st place! The man had nothing left to give, so he was next in line for heaven. And then that wonderful list of small gestures. It made me smile :)
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Date: 2/14/2017 10:41:00 PM
Congrats John to win top place on your wonderful poem.
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Date: 2/14/2017 8:33:00 PM
Such a heart-warming poem, and beautifully written, John ! Congratulations!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/14/2017 9:20:00 PM
Thank you Carrie
Date: 2/14/2017 8:08:00 PM
Big congratulations John!!! Very well done!!! Hugggs deb!!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/14/2017 9:19:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Deborah.
Date: 2/14/2017 7:24:00 PM
Congrats in your win with this uplifting poem, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/14/2017 9:19:00 PM
Thanks Agnes, I appreciate your continuing support
Date: 2/14/2017 5:34:00 PM
Bravo! Light & Love
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John Lawless
Date: 2/14/2017 9:18:00 PM
Thank You Debbie, it is an honor to grace the top of your list.
Date: 2/12/2017 9:59:00 PM
Love it John and the lovely man--not so crazy after all !!~~~Jeanie~~~
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John Lawless
Date: 2/14/2017 9:16:00 PM
Thanks Jeanie, I have been blessed in my life to cross paths with some amazing people.
Date: 2/10/2017 1:25:00 PM
You have conveyed the perfect picture of a beautiful soul. A FAV for me and will win big. Hugs, SuZ
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John Lawless
Date: 2/14/2017 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne, appreciate your comment and ...well you called it .... a winner.
Date: 1/30/2017 3:40:00 AM
This is a mind blowing masterpiece, John:) a 7 and a fave :) a winner in my eyes, reminds me of the verse, Acts 20: 35:)
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John Lawless
Date: 1/31/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thanks so much for the compliment and high mark Jo. I have been blessed by the "appearance" of magnificent mentors in my lifetime.
Date: 1/25/2017 5:28:00 PM
Elegantly and unequivocally superb...I bow...god bless...^WW^
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John Lawless
Date: 1/25/2017 9:17:00 PM
Thank you WW for such wonderful words of praise.
Date: 1/25/2017 10:51:00 AM
Wow, such an inspiring and uplifting piece of writing John. This was absolutely fantastic and left me with such a good feeling and even a little better outlook on the way I approach things.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/25/2017 9:16:00 PM
Well Chris I have had some brilliantly spiritual mentors in my life. This is a brief composite of a few of the lessons they taught more by action then words

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