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Hide your face You're torn apart They keep on beating Your once happy heart They push and shove Put you through hell Nobody helps Or listens when you tell You start getting up They push you back down You got to be strong Don't show them your frown You stare at the blade Weary and tired Filled with sadness Wishing your life had expire You take the blade Cut so deep Blood rushes out You release a weep With your last breathe You manage to say "I'm so sorry It got worse everyday"

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Evan Law

Date: 11/27/2018 10:48:00 AM

i want to know what is the type of poem, the theme and were it shows it in the poem

Evan Law

Date: 11/27/2018 10:47:00 AM

i want to know what is the type of poem, the theme and were it shows it in the poem

Max Corvus

Date: 5/29/2015 9:04:00 AM

Rather dramatic and flamboyant with motifs of sadness and abuse. I'd say it was written by a teen, but a teen with an aspiration to become a poet.

Evan Law
Date: 11/27/2018 10:49:00 AM

I agree