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Ramblings Between Friends - Budgie and I

A line in a poem must never stray A word in a line must know its place For every action we take, we create We change the order of things Molecules, atoms, DNA, tones, notes All connected, like water between ripples Snow crystals in avalanches Our hands gesturing in the air Create movement, small folds in time All in orbit like the cosmos itself As gems fill the sky above every smile As friendship exists without definition But colours life, world and universe *** July 6, 2017 Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/9/2017 7:16:00 AM

This is wonderful :) xomo x2

Sara Ella

Date: 7/6/2017 9:25:00 PM

Friendships are the BEST and so is this wonderful collaboration. :) <3

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:25:00 AM

Thanks Sara, and yes! It most certainly is :)

Chris Green

Date: 7/6/2017 2:04:00 PM

Bravo, this was really cool you two. This one makes the reader think and ponder a while. Very creative.

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:25:00 AM

It's fun, isn't it :) Wasn't even sure if it would come out in such a way that it would be enjoyable for others.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/6/2017 11:04:00 AM

Excellent writing, Darren and WW:)

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 11:09:00 AM

Daniel, thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2017 9:19:00 AM

You guys have a fabulous connection - love the poem Darren and Budgie:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 11:09:00 AM

Yeah, we honestly do. Thanks Jan :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/6/2017 8:02:00 AM

This is great guys

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thanks! It was just so much fun to do :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/6/2017 7:02:00 AM

I like the friendship exists without definition :) beautiful write, both of you. !

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 9:04:00 AM

Yes, and that's exactly true. We are great friends, without definition!

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/6/2017 6:56:00 AM

A beautiful blend of abstract and concrete ... lovely meaningfulness in every line ... great power in small folds of time and radiance in in the space above every smile ... inspiring poem ... love it ...

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 9:03:00 AM

heh, it certainly is, it was more an exchange of ideas, and fun, and it grew sort of into something of a poem, I love it.

White Wolf

Date: 7/6/2017 4:25:00 AM

Heraclitus: The hidden connection is stronger than the obvious one! A pleasure as always, Duir!

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 5:34:00 AM

We can really just chat the morning away, can't we :)