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Rambling

That rambling castle across the landscape bewitched my heart As though divinity has signed, gorgeous is its art. Are the cherubims relaxing, spreading out their legs and hands? Are these archaic, ornate boulders on mountainous strands? Cave-like, carved curvy corridors crookedly coil around Vertical and horizontal length, width, and depth rebound Celestially thrill-filled, airy arrays in sunlit style Are Hephaestus and Athena spreading a sapphire smile? Points, lines, planes, volumes, and magnitude speak tonnes of volumes. Are these flawless frills and folds parts of angelic costumes? Gloriously intricate, cosy carvings, and wide wings Brim-fill with cosmically grace-filled mimetic mouldings These sprawling, spreading, sturdy structures seem to symbolise Incomprehensibly divine marvels that synthesise Short, long, sharp, and blunt; straight and twisted mortal existence That draws, from the spiritual source, its soul sustenance.

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Date: 4/23/2024 6:07:00 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
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Date: 2/28/2024 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative "Rambling" write/story/ending. I enjoyed reading this one... Have a great/fun day writing away...............
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