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Raking Leaves

Raked into a pile Run and jump with abandon Color explosion Patiently rake once again Making memories of fall
For the leaves contest...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/5/2011 11:29:00 PM
Very awesome Barbara! You wrote this with great skill! I love the Tanka form as well! Outstanding work!!
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Date: 10/5/2011 10:45:00 PM
:) ~N .... thanks!
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