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Raising the Dead

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Raising the Dead

Velvet soft, like rose petals, these thoughts 
Free falling like rain drops unto the thirsty earth
Rivulets break cobwebs washing dust prints away
Seeping through a wall of steel formed by time 
Will they raise the dead; roll the stone away?

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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 11:44:00 AM
    Nice write.

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:32:00 AM
    awesome write here - just love it

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 10:59:00 AM
    You find very appropriate words to describe gentle feelings, anchored to nature

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 10:26:00 PM
    Very detailed images in this poem... I especially liked the reference to the Resurrection in the last line. Elegant descriptions of something I (for some reason) thought was going to be creepy. Perhaps I've seen too many horror films and so when I read "raising the dead" my mind goes elsewhere... lol.

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 3:39:00 PM
    Wonderful Imagery! I especially like the third line... Jack