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Raising Teens and Pre-Teens

A tempest rages deep within A storm brews in my soul Outside conflict seeping in And stirring in my bowl So many things that I expect And never seem to gain I try to stand back and reflect But I'm clouded by the pain A simple task that I request Be done when I get home Is crumpled up and trampled on Then tossed before my throne To me it's like a mockery I'm talking to the wall Why is it so hard to do The things I ask you all An hour a day is all you need To get these things in line An hour a day then you can play And everything is fine Cold and tired, I come home late And not a thing has moved No-one raised a finger here To see if I'd approve Why is it so much to ask For help along the way I know that all inside this house Can hear the words I say When e're I leave before the dawn To toil in the sun I hope that this might be the day When all the chores are done Maybe just an hour more Is all the time they need I give it then I come back home To find they paid no heed A tempest rages deep within The confines of my soul Thank God I have the poetry To keep me in control Rockman Even though those days have passed, I still find that writing is the best way to vent feelings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/28/2011 7:54:00 AM
Yep yup Rock man. I got you on this one man! This one's on my favorites now and a seven rate. Too close to home bro. check out a cpl new kinda funny ones I posted. One's called "Jack Ace" . and the other is called " Not Sofa King Cool"
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Date: 5/6/2011 5:06:00 PM
Thanks Randy, for describing my life so perfectly in this rhyme! Ellen <3
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Date: 5/5/2011 3:29:00 PM
I can relate to you I have a 4 and 8 yr old both girls both just like me in their own ways can be very challenging and that is exactly why I write very nicely worded. cory
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Date: 5/3/2011 10:10:00 AM
Thanks Randy, this sounds like a black powerful spell.. of no no"s.. i mean that in a funny ways.. I know exactly what your saying before all the rage starts to cook up... And yes... poetry sometimes can be your best friend to release them feelings... glad i stopped by to enjoy your poetry... take care.. soup mail... p.d.
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