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Rainy Season

. Lone Cacti awaits With hope for this very day... Rain__restore all life (Inspired by the picture of the cacti with the clouds but not an entry in the contest.)

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Vrushani Thaker

Date: 6/30/2010 11:22:00 PM

very good haiku!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for commenting on my poetry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!

Daver Austin

Date: 6/25/2010 8:18:00 AM

The lonely cacti, eh? Great Haiku. Congrats on the selection. daver

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/23/2010 9:17:00 AM

This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~

Tk Ross

Date: 6/21/2010 11:54:00 AM

I love Haikus, and this one is particularly lovely:) nice job:)--TK

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sara. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Danny Nunn

Date: 6/19/2010 8:45:00 AM

One thing about a old cactus, a little rain will give it a lot of hope I should know...thanks on Advisaries, some of the best advice I ever had...God Bless Danny

Sruthi Ajith

Date: 6/18/2010 3:07:00 AM

patient waiting of cacti is nicely expressed

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/17/2010 3:44:00 PM

Great imagery here, Sara. Rain! One of the greatest blessings..during these coming summer months will look forward to the many rain storms of the season. Peace, Audrey

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/16/2010 7:25:00 PM

very cool haiku! lines 1 & 2 see fruition in line 3!!!! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 2:03:00 PM

Well this is a fine entry Sara.. and good luck in Paula's contest.. enjoyed the Cacti... awaiting .. with luv Linda-Marie..

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/16/2010 1:17:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Sara! Thanks for taking time to stop by and read some of my poetry- always appreciated!~Tirzah~

Carol Fillmore

Date: 6/16/2010 1:00:00 PM

I like this one:) Thank you Sara for your comments, and yes we are ruled by whichever thoughts overtake...the dark or the light... I especially like your Holy Spirit comment...so right on!

John Freeman

Date: 6/16/2010 8:24:00 AM

This write brings to mind, Sara. The desert of Texas when it is in bloom. I have had the pleasure of crossing it in the spring when it was in flower. Quite pleasing, amazing beauty for the natural eyes to enjoy. Per your comment, "Earth's Wobble!" The influence of humanity's carnal mind(C. James 3:5-6 & Gen. 1:26) has had an adverse effect on an otherwise sterile(perfect) earth nature. We(humans) need to give a more honest heed to what our tongues set in motion. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/16/2010 7:34:00 AM

Hi Sara, so well observed and written!!! I used to eat lots of cactus fruit when staying in Israel and I remember well the cacti in the Atacama Desert in Chile. First rains in the desert let amazingly flower the sand. This is a great picture! Coming back to you comment, which is much appreciated, I'll have to tell you that we got far too many wild hogs in Germany in the forests. They even enter the outskirts of Berlin and devastating the gardens. The are a rearl pest over here. ...Gert