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Rainy Daze

Rainy Daze sitting quietly I watch as the raindrops reassemble in the puddle schoolchildren at recess awaiting the forming of lines holding raindrop hands humming sweetly on the steaming pavement erasing schoolyard blacktop shape changing the oily rainbow of the bus stop bottle caps setting sail in surging gutter streams umbrellas lifting on a cloudy breeze. raindrops, skydivers from a distant sea, teasing the garden locked landlubber’s with tales of travel and of history, of gardens drenched in mystery sitting in my rainy daze sharing cool moist now with then John G. Lawless 9/10/2014

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Date: 10/10/2014 11:10:00 AM
You have displayed a wonderful imaginative poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:38:00 AM
- I enjoy reading your great and well written poem, John ! - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest! - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 10/10/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise.
Date: 10/10/2014 6:25:00 AM
Creative and interesting poem, John, congrats on the win
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John Lawless
Date: 10/10/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta for your support
Date: 10/10/2014 4:50:00 AM
very expressive with lovely imagery. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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John Lawless
Date: 10/10/2014 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Jan I've always tended to go play in the rain, not hide from it.
Date: 10/10/2014 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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John Lawless
Date: 10/10/2014 8:52:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by always nice to hear from you.
Date: 9/12/2014 10:36:00 PM
john, this is very creative the way you present your small verses. Each event is like a drop of rain!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/12/2014 10:58:00 PM
Growing up in the city, hot dog day afternoons, sudden showers, and misty melancholy. Thanks Andrea
Date: 9/12/2014 4:07:00 AM
Nice work John, I like its ebb n flow...GL
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John Lawless
Date: 9/12/2014 10:57:00 PM
thanks Mark for stopping by and reading.
Date: 9/11/2014 8:33:00 PM
Terrific John
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John Lawless
Date: 9/12/2014 10:55:00 PM
Thank you David.
Date: 9/11/2014 6:10:00 PM
Very well done; great imagery.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/12/2014 10:55:00 PM
Thanks Mark for checking in.

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