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Rainy Day

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Rainy Day

The rain fell relentlessly
falling down in curtains
blocking things from view
cloaking the world in mist

Trees with near streams
running of their leaves
silvery puddles forming
joining together with others

An incessant sound of drips
drumming out all other noise
then a gleam of hope appears
as the sun weakly starts to shine

It bursts through the clouds
drying up all the landscape
droplets on leaves glisten
perfect prisms reflecting

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  1. Date: 8/7/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Like seasons, nature comes and goes. One day it rains, the next it snows. Time is short, tomorrow knows. Eternity will always glow.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/7/2013 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi again Robert nature governs all she is the true spirit of life Ty for reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 4:56:00 AM
    I enjoyed this one my friend.Your descriptions here are vivid enough that your words become a reality in my mind.Well done.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/3/2013 5:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so kind of you my dearest M.M all well? Love Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 8:06:00 AM
    this is very nice, the way you vividly described the sight and sound of rain and ended with the glistening dew drops!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/2/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Andrea for visiting and nice remarks shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:58:00 AM
    I can see this rainy day with you!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/2/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Craig nice of you to stop by and guess what, its the most gorgeous sunny day here lol. ty Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 1:13:00 AM
    I love rain and love this poem too : )

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/2/2013 2:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Jack warm rain is super cold uggh. Ty for your lime shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 5:09:00 PM
    - I enjoy my vacation in Turkey ... no rainy days ... A good poem Shadow! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/2/2013 2:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i went to Turkey 2006 nice place Anne ty for stopping by Shadow x smiles