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Rainy Day

The rain fell relentlessly falling down in curtains blocking things from view cloaking the world in mist Trees with near streams running of their leaves silvery puddles forming joining together with others An incessant sound of drips drumming out all other noise then a gleam of hope appears as the sun weakly starts to shine It bursts through the clouds drying up all the landscape droplets on leaves glisten perfect prisms reflecting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/7/2013 4:40:00 PM
Like seasons, nature comes and goes. One day it rains, the next it snows. Time is short, tomorrow knows. Eternity will always glow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/7/2013 5:07:00 PM
Hi again Robert nature governs all she is the true spirit of life Ty for reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/3/2013 4:56:00 AM
I enjoyed this one my friend.Your descriptions here are vivid enough that your words become a reality in my mind.Well done.
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Date: 8/3/2013 5:20:00 AM
so kind of you my dearest M.M all well? Love Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/2/2013 8:06:00 AM
this is very nice, the way you vividly described the sight and sound of rain and ended with the glistening dew drops!
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Date: 8/2/2013 8:17:00 AM
Ty Andrea for visiting and nice remarks shadow x smiles
Date: 8/2/2013 1:13:00 AM
I love rain and love this poem too : )
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/2/2013 2:33:00 AM
hi Jack warm rain is super cold uggh. Ty for your lime shadow x smiles
Date: 8/1/2013 5:09:00 PM
- I enjoy my vacation in Turkey ... no rainy days ... A good poem Shadow! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/2/2013 2:35:00 AM
i went to Turkey 2006 nice place Anne ty for stopping by Shadow x smiles

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