Rainy Day

Drip, drip, drip, drip Into the water I want to slip Chills run down my spine That sweet warm water will be mine Heat runs through my veins As I watch the pouring rain The chills slowly subside As I ache to go outside Instead I choose to sit And watch my granny knit A sweater that will be for me I really should let her be Looking down at my mug The chills begin to tug I see mom out in the rain Better put on the kettle again October 9, 2011

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/9/2024 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2016 11:35:00 AM

Jessica,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/9/2011 2:54:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this delightful poem, Jessica. I love rainy days too..as long as I can have a cup of hot chocolate or some coffee! Keep sharing! Love, Annalise