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Rainmakers

when there was a drought we raindanced across the lawn splashing through sprinklers 7/15/11 Received 4th place in "Best Rain Poem" contest

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Moses Ombuge

Date: 8/31/2011 2:52:00 AM

Beautiful, it gives me images in my mind, congrats Susan

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/29/2011 4:38:00 PM

sprinklers spray dancing children glow in heat--- brown lawn *brown shows drought..without telling there is a drought

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/24/2011 12:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, Susan for all your inspiring comments and I truly am so touched and happy that you faved me :D That made my visit here -- thank you :D -- I remember commenting on this wonderful write, yay, it is actually raining over here...^_^

Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2011 10:08:00 AM

Many congrats on your SUPER WIN,Susan with this great HAIKU. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 9:42:00 AM

Congratulations Susan on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/18/2011 3:36:00 AM

Cute! I can see it clearly! Nicely done indeed.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/17/2011 3:45:00 PM

I really liked how you make your own rain here with the sprinklers, Susan -- hope this helps, there's just one sneaky letter k in sprinklers...super congrats on your win :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 8:20:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., susan

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/17/2011 7:20:00 AM

A refreshing piece that brings smiles and joy...Congrats my dear Susan,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/17/2011 7:17:00 AM

Congrats Susan on a fantastic win with this exhilarating write luv... did a few raindances myself in the past... great one ..enjoy..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/17/2011 2:25:00 AM

Susan, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d

Johnny Sumler

Date: 7/16/2011 7:11:00 PM

Brings back old memories. Love this little beautiful poem!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/16/2011 3:17:00 PM

LOL, what a wonderful picture this one conjures up! My first date: I finished my coffee, got in the taxi and went home... I phoned her and she said she had a date with another guy! I can laugh about it now!!! I was very shy with girls when I was younger : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/16/2011 1:47:00 PM

Lovely haiku with nice images to convey the thought, Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2011 7:40:00 PM

Let's see if I can finally get my comment thru. It kept coming up systems error earlier. ok, I LOVE this. It reminded me of those happy times. I swear kids don't care so much about doing this as in the old days. btw, it's "drought" excellent haiku! luv, andrea