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Rainfall

Hiding alone in the shadows guarded, trusting no one silently watching, waiting Is life worth living? Can anyone save him? His vision clouded, blurred The sunless skies have him confused Rainfall begins a drenching and soaking rain pours down flooding the autumn bonfires Which blazed in once upon a time with ardent passion in the dense forest of happily ever afters

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/8/2014 5:23:00 AM
powerful piece of writing love how you drew this dear friend
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Date: 10/31/2014 9:24:00 AM
I am glad I stopped by this morning, another exceptional piece.
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Date: 10/28/2014 5:06:00 PM
Great write, sad and dark but the poetic flair was maintained.
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Date: 10/27/2014 11:41:00 AM
7 all the way....I must say, I'm a sucker for free verse. This was a fabulous write. The tone and the imagery is awesome... What's life without rainfalls?!
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Date: 10/26/2014 11:10:00 PM
Hmmmmmm....interesting write here. So much truth. Good one.
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Date: 10/26/2014 6:33:00 PM
It is terrible to be in such a dark place. Thankfully the sun WILL shine again. It's always worth waiting for.
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