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Raindrops Dance On Rusting Sheets of Galvanize

The thunder roars The lightning flashed the wind is strong And raindrops dance on rusting sheets Of galvanize She clung to me, trembling and cold as the Thunder roared with anger and the lightening Struck, its violent brightness illuminating the Old barn, illustrating the glittering wetness Of her soft silky skin, she jumped and I held Her close As the lighting struck again I saw her eyes Telling me she felt protected and as the rain Drops danced on rusting sheets of galvanize And the winds try to sent this place to a Cruel demise I kissed the sparkling raindrops That rested on her beckoning eyes As the favor of her breast rest against my Chest its protruding firmness sending waves Of fervor through the corridors of my being My hands explore the sculpture that is her Body, touching her in every special place She trembles speaks not a word but holds my Face with adoring grace As we lay amidst the bales of hay, I taste the Liquid of her mouth now one with the lingering Drops of rain and I feel the pulse of her parted Thighs the oneness of bodies now in rhythm With the night And as the heavens opened and the thunder Roared the winds blow against the old cedar door and in the soggy moons light Raindrops dance on rusting sheets of galvanize And lightning flashed as if taking snapshots of Time as it stood It is that moment she says that she knew of Motherhood Earl S. Jackson Aug 2006 Copyright © 2009 Earl S. Jackson, all rights reserved

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Date: 3/9/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Earl. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Earl. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2009 7:52:00 PM
Beautiful write here, Earl ... great imagery ... smile ... from the title to the last line this is just excellent. Thanks for bringing your talent to PoetrySoup and I look forward to reading more from you!
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Date: 9/26/2009 2:24:00 PM
Tender, passionate, and plays out like a movie I've seen! Can hear the sound of the rain and smell the hay. Well written!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/26/2009 1:16:00 PM
Very passionate write. Keep writing. Sara
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