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Raindrops and Stormclouds

If your kisses were like raindrops where would they fall? Would they fall on my lips Or nowhere at all? If your hugs were like raindrops where would they land? Would they land on my waist Or be absorbed in the sand? If storm clouds were coming would you hug away the harm? If storm clouds were coming would you kiss away their charm? If storm clouds were coming would you chase them away? If storm clouds were coming would you keep me safe today?

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Thomas Hsi

Date: 8/10/2017 2:33:00 AM

Raindrops and stormclouds---always beautiful to read about. I really like how you tied in raindrops with kisses and "where they would fall." Bravo! Well done.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/8/2016 3:52:00 PM

Nice one Holly. I enjoyed reading this :)

Holly Bohto
Date: 12/8/2016 6:06:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Chris Green

Date: 12/8/2016 3:41:00 PM

I loved this one Holly. Talk about a nice rhythmic flow and the feelings/emotions are expressed perfectly. This poem was beautiful.

Holly Bohto
Date: 12/8/2016 6:09:00 PM

Thank you Rythmic Chris. I always appreciate your encouragement.