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Raindrops and Petals

I ascended the mountain of dreams To see the universe's seams Where lightning crackles An ancient god cackles Wave after wave overlap Enough to alter the map And when flowers burst To fulfill an old one's thirst The flowers form a bowl With celestial water filled whole I want to dance among the stars And make music with Mars Behind every shed tear Is a lost dream I fear Raindrops and petals Tear drops and metal Where pain and pleasure meet I refuse to face defeat

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Date: 8/1/2022 8:51:00 AM
Hey Christopher….really enjoyed this poem….it has a sad spiritual feeling to it for me! Flows beautifully…..Debx
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Christopher Goss
Date: 8/3/2022 7:27:00 PM
Thank you!

Book: Shattered Sighs