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Raindrop

I'm a raindrop on the window pane Running here, there, nowhere but down. Lost in the cool flurries of rain As the storm dons its liquid gown. Deep in my soul a reflection of you Magnifying the memories and grief. The years we had now seem so few Our rainbows seem so very brief. I raindrop down the dark abyss So futile seem the echoes of fun. I pool in how sorely I miss Our liquid laughter in the sun. Raindrop, raindrop going nowhere at all Dribbling slowly down memory lane. I drip and droop and languidly fall In stagnant pools filled with pain. In my heart the memories lie, Your rainbows dance and sway. So many storms have passed me by Since you left and went away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 7/1/2009 8:03:00 AM
The emotion is forwarded in a creative way with the idea of rain. Nice use of rhyme. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful 4th! Karen
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Date: 1/22/2009 10:09:00 AM
I have always seen 'Your Love' for this Your perhaps soul-mate of Yours that You have written about often, as You have above here!!!~ Sometimes in life, you 'never' find a love greater than "The One!!?"~And I hate to possibly see "Your Priceless Heart" suffering for reason dear Heidie!!?~So, wherever "You" are?~ "May Mercies Love, Light and Blessings, Always Pour Upon You & Your Life!!!"~I hope to hear from "You" again soon!!!~"My Love To You Always, John!"~Bye Precious Heidie Buys!:)
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Date: 1/22/2009 9:58:00 AM
Smile~"Hello Precious & Gifted & Lovely Heidie Buys!!!"~How very wonderful it was to hear from "You" the other day!!!~I sincerely hope that life has been treating "You" beautifully dear lady!!?~You know, I think about "You" often~wondering how You are? Remembering, how very "Gifted You Are" at writing~ One of 'the very best' I have 'ever' found within this place!!!~Cont~
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Date: 8/27/2008 4:03:00 PM
a very beautiful warm and tender poem. thank you for reading my so many summers ago and for your comments
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Date: 8/6/2008 4:46:00 PM
This is simply stated - breathtaking. Lines 3 and 4 are so beautiful, this really moved me. Awesome awesome awesome! Loved this! Love Kristin
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Date: 8/6/2008 1:04:00 AM
Loved this image Heidie..Your rainbows dance and sway.'One for my favourites listing I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your ongoing welcome comments on my postings
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