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Raindrop

Raindrop So simple, So brave Coming from miles away Unaware of being Yet having vital meaning You fall today So Simple So Brave

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2010 11:30:00 AM

hello Chris, I had to post my reporting live on the soup in to 2 halves, hope you read both. Have a wonderful day,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2010 10:27:00 AM

My gosh, I already comment this one a lot. But yes that one took me the whole hour to put it together. I wanted to hide all the thoughts of perceptions in every other line. that is one the poems I will post today. nice to see you on line so early. Take care,..p.d.

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/28/2010 10:55:00 AM

I really like this actually. its simple in itself, but gives, hmm, whats the right word....it shows...characteristic of the raindrop...i suppose that word will have to work. ~Rain

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2010 3:47:00 PM

just stoping by, to say hi! just here reading random poems. On any chosen old comments of mine. or just favorite poets,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2010 7:32:00 PM

simple and brave, it rained here today in south Texas, got wet on my daily walk after work. The one i see them Cardinals in. lol, i thought i would make it. its a good thing i like and enjoy the rain like my Haiku. Thank you Chris for the comments on my poetry today,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2010 6:04:00 AM

Very enjoyable read Chris. Love, Carol

Christopher Brantley

Date: 5/16/2010 5:33:00 PM

We sure did. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/16/2010 5:30:00 PM

Great descriptive short write..We had some of those raindrops today...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara