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Rainclouds Gathered

Rainclouds gathered and My dream drenched my lover's breasts She clasped me closer As if the thunder of my kiss struck The wild forests Fire touched the sky she cried in wonder Rain began to fall Till a lake was formed In her surf blue eyes I was deep asleep Thunder struck again The rocks tumbled down the hills Earth shook and shook his icy head Like violent monsters in dancing spree And suddenly all stopped wind lulled Elements were listening A distant ecstatic moan Slowly the moon rose in hope To shed rays on the waters No ripples calm lake was laughing I was in deep sleep The urchin crickets had the last laugh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/1/2015 8:45:00 PM
This is a beautiful, descriptive write full of dreamy imagery...I like your ideas throughout... "Rain began to fall Till a lake was formed In her surf blue eyes" That's a memorable bit right there! Loved reading! Always, Laura
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/7/2015 10:49:00 AM
Love Laura. So sweet you are. rajat
Date: 2/1/2015 6:48:00 PM
Hello Rajat, dropped by for a laugh, instead I was stupefied, this awesome piece that just, clutched at my gut, and held me aghast. My, how you write...enchanting, gripping...i was not disappointed, was greatly entertained. A 7, Kim ;)
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/7/2015 10:51:00 AM
Hi lovely Kim hahahah I am writing fun poems for you soon. So nice of you. God bless.
Date: 2/1/2015 12:07:00 PM
Hello Rajat! Very nice pen Rajat! A 7 from me! Very romantic with some of your great humor into it, my dearest friend. lol :) Love 'n hugs! xxxxx D.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/7/2015 10:54:00 AM
D my sweetie. Thank you soooo much. Love. take care..rajat
Date: 2/1/2015 6:14:00 AM
Interesting work..Not sure the true interpertation of it but one can just guess..Very passionate but with a feeling of love lost..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/7/2015 10:53:00 AM
Lovely Sara. I have portrayed a dream sequence here. So..Your comments are a pleasure to me always. Love
Date: 1/30/2015 11:11:00 AM
Rajat, a 7 and a beautiful write. Dreams or our get away from life, not unless they are nightmares. Blessings Sir Eve
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/30/2015 12:20:00 PM
My sweet Eve YOU CAN> Your friend
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/30/2015 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Eve for your inspiring comments.Love to you and Sonny. Best wishes to your family.God bless all.Hope you are taking care of your health. Sonny is ok I think.Hugs! Your friend Rajat

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