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Rainbows Dreaming of Gray

Scrambling tooth and nail for a patterned fate I approached the lofty mansion of Learning's Gate. All cued up for a slip of paper - the one they call Degree, halfway convinced that I hallucinated humanity. For who under their own free will would venture into this spiraling sameness: this illustriously-in-debt, this Regal Club of the Nameless? I bellowed my voice into the air (This great atrocity!). But not a single student seemed to care: So well fashioned they were, adorned in their prized medals of mediocrity. Along with their unwillingness to ever stray, all too content to be but rainbows dreaming of gray. I hung my head in such morose emptiness. As I fashioned myself: the uniquely ubiquitous. And what a fool I was to join the crowd - and yet so halfheartedly. Striving for the cirrus clouds, the silver moon, and then the galaxy. For my actions didn't match my cerebral creativity I was statue still cursed with a meandering mind (and other such extremities). Exploding with hopes large enough for two I sat clearly convinced languid leaps would do. But one cannot daintily decide to dream the Dream for it is merely the seed, another earthly deed. You're not allowed to walk away, gandering as it grows, for we are likened as the summer sun - keeping the rivers a'flow. "Picturing profits in your hands do not till the all too ready land" explained the elderly gent with leathered palms, "Someday soon you will understand." And though we aim to be ourselves gravity inevitably brings us to the grid. Imagination like a heavy rain; we the paper people so helplessly hid. But fear not ye denizens of the cherished cubbyhole: where you keep under lock and key your dust-laden soul. If one burgeoning blunder tore it all asunder surely one single spirited spark could heal even the most dormant of hearts. So fare thee well oh Cookie Cutter Coop - Another day on that wretched plain, and I'd surely die. I'm glad just to sever sameness in one fell swoop by hanging on a star in the midnight sky. NOTE: I always enjoyed using alliteration when I could... and with this particular one I went a little bit nutty... but I think it turned out okay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/8/2016 3:51:00 PM
I'm always nutty with my talents...let go! I like it!
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Date: 3/18/2016 7:58:00 PM
Nutty is good. Love this poem!! So many memorable lines... I like this moment - "And what a fool I was to join the crowd - and yet so halfheartedly. Striving for the cirrus clouds, the silver moon, and then the galaxy."...nicely done..and "For who under their own free will would venture into this spiraling sameness: this illustriously-in-debt, this Regal Club of the Nameless?" Don't settle for less than the best!! The voice of your poetry passionately and powerfully shines. Always, Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/20/2016 1:54:00 AM
Thanks again Laura! This poem was inspired by a picture I saw once: it showed a trove of kids, in rainbow colors, going through Public School and coming out gray! It made me think of how institutionalized education can rob of us our color, and the irony of working hard to achieve less. Appreciate you leaving your super feedback!
Date: 3/9/2016 9:49:00 AM
Timothy: "Picturing profits in your hands. . . . . . .you will understand." What a wonderful bit of writing. Well done. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/10/2016 12:14:00 AM
Thanks Old Buck. I enjoyed your poetry as well :)
Date: 2/24/2016 2:40:00 PM
Re-visiting this poem. My husband and I never went to University but went learnt a profession in careers that we chose -me as a nurse and he as a fitter and turner. We both loved to read and learn and we have continued a lifelong education of ourselves. I think people can build a life without a college Ed in many cases. Self learning builds Character. SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 9:33:00 PM
Very true, Suz! More important to understand the life lessons first and foremost :) This is one of my more "imagination pieces", as I've never actually attended college or University either! It has it's place, but for me, it sounds like a colossal debt ... I tend to think that people's potential are much higher, once you figure out where your passion lies.
Date: 11/19/2014 1:39:00 PM
Hey Tim....well..must say I really enjoyed this a lot..the elderly gents in my life are my dad and grandpa...way to point out the importance of life's education.....well done
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 11/25/2014 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Donna! I enjoyed writing this one immensely.
Date: 11/8/2014 8:51:00 PM
I so completely relate to this. The struggles I had making plans on what to do after graduating High School. One parent telling me I had to go to get a "better education and job" while the other said I'd be fine. Truthfully, there has been many people who didn't go to college and through hard work has made it to the top. College is not always the "right thing" shadowing works too. There's so many options for different people, not everyone having to be the same thing. It's what makes us unique.
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Caleah Buil
Date: 12/2/2014 1:01:00 PM
Exactly! Sometimes that "piece of paper" doesn't even get you what you may exactly want. Anyway, I have plenty of time I'm sure. I may try next year, but I don't think a year without college is going to kill me, contrary to my family. Ha.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 11/9/2014 12:48:00 PM
Agreed! For some the college life suits them to a tee. But in my opinion... the idea of getting a "degree" to show that you're intelligent is a bit artificial and arbitrary. My opinion of it might change if I ever attend college in the future... but for now it is what it is. Thanks for reading and your insightful comment, Caleah :)
Date: 10/19/2014 8:00:00 AM
If people approach learning with that perspective that will be exactly the result. University does not provide all the answers but instead helps people form the questions and provides the with tools to help discover the answers. There have been many people without formal education who have gone on to achieve greatness so I know there are different ways.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/20/2014 3:58:00 AM
I can see what you're saying. I suppose what I don't like is the people that have that attitude where if you don't attend college you'll never amount to anything... it isn't the only way to become successful :)
Date: 10/17/2014 11:17:00 AM
This one goes into my favs Timothy: Sounds like you have been hard at study and learned more about human nature...The title is wonderful and I like how you hold it in an entertaining flight pattern with strong images " leathered hands' Thanks for your ray of sunshine...I am glad to be counted as a friend. SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/18/2014 11:23:00 PM
I am humbled by your compliment and friendship, Suzanne.
Date: 10/17/2014 8:50:00 AM
Timothy..So good to see you back,and I really enjoyed reading your amazing poem. filled with alteration which makes the poem resonates muxg better into my ear.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/18/2014 11:22:00 PM
Alliteration is a very fun literary tool. Happy to BE back as well :)
Date: 10/17/2014 8:09:00 AM
You are gifted my friend. I personally would loved to have had the university experience. The cubby hole approach is determined by the partaker of the experience. I believe for many university leads to the expanding of minds and possibilities. By exposing people to new ideas they can imagine beyond their borders. Both my wife and son embodie this principle.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/18/2014 11:22:00 PM
I totally agree with you on news ideas and minds expanding. But whenever I think of college I think of a bunch of creative people being forced into a mold. I think of people getting into massive debt so they may work for someone else... I think of people being taught WHAT to think and not HOW to think... but that probably isn't the same everywhere. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, Rick!
Date: 10/17/2014 3:07:00 AM
wow i must say timeless piece very beautifully penned
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/18/2014 11:18:00 PM
Thank you... means a lot Liam!

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