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Rainbow Witch

The pointed hat she wears sublime with dust from Neptune's moon; though magic flowing from my love will fade and perish soon. She twirls her glowing cape - its light is from the stars, the heat of Venus fire and glittered sands of Mars. The colours fluctuate in shades of blinding light, and flash from black to white, then aquamarine - crimson - chartreuse - coral - lavender - lemon - lilac - saffron - tangerine - watermelon... And as her soul departs this night, her colours fill the heavens bright. written 9th April for Emile's Changing Colours contest

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Date: 6/5/2021 6:35:00 PM
Dear Jack, your brilliant pen flows with enchantment. I am bewitched by the power of your beautiful artistry. Vivid and creative, your poem sparkles with imagery, imagination, rhythm and rhymes. I adore the title as well. Congratulations for your excellent win in Emile's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/25/2021 7:34:00 AM
I see as well that it is a Winner. Congrats!
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Date: 4/25/2021 7:33:00 AM
What an exceptional piece. I Love the imagery Jack. One of your best.
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Date: 4/19/2021 10:02:00 AM
Delightfully creative Jack. Witty, full of whimsy. I really like the punch of the last two lines - like the fleeting scent of perfume! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/19/2021 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations Jack! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a fun contest to judge and your fantasy, color infused poem, successfully caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 4/12/2021 5:57:00 AM
- Brilliant written, Jack :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/11/2021 9:24:00 PM
This is a wonderful whimsical write, Jack, love it. Good luck in Emile's contest. Eve
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Date: 4/11/2021 1:02:00 AM
Free verse in rhyme, keeping a lovely flow with metric ability. Your creativity never lets you down, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/10/2021 7:24:00 PM
LOve it, Jack, The poetry Superb, the colours dazzle.
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Date: 4/10/2021 1:17:00 PM
that was pretty cool how you got all those colors in. You are a clever one, my friend, but it's so great to see you doing free verse and using great imagery!
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Date: 4/10/2021 8:35:00 AM
Hi Jack, You’ve a good entry for the contest. I found it to be clever and creative. Good imagery and content too. I could just picture her and all the amazing colors she gets ready to go. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/9/2021 4:21:00 PM
Lovely Jack. It reminds me of the Northern Lights. Great job God Bless, JB.
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:50:00 PM
Wow ~ beautiful, Jack ~ superbly done
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:42:00 PM
Vivid imagery indeed. Be careful with this one. I smell trouble. Well penned. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:43:00 PM
Creative work. I guess she went out in full color. Thanks for your visits. Sara
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Date: 4/9/2021 1:56:00 PM
Beautifully penned Jack..
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Date: 4/9/2021 1:13:00 PM
Jack I love this poem and I think your imagination is brilliant, definitely a touch from another realm - intensely awesome. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/9/2021 12:46:00 PM
so descriptive jack I dont know where to start with this contest, good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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