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Rainbow Wheels - Collaboration With Chris Green

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In the path of sundust multicolored dancing particles he sits, sulks, mutters, dust gathers on his wheels The daylight taunts him beyond the glass defense pulling on his emotions as the heat sneers sarcastically One finger is reaching rubs the bright colors of his motionless wheels in projected frustration When a gray cloud wanders by, a momentary distraction His mind bends in assorted directions while thoughts turn to winter He wishes magic wand dreams snow men sitting on sleds legs, willpower propelled long-haired, giggling faeries The cold wind whips about his skin as he bundles up, not for warmth, but comfort His blanket brings the snow to him, soft fabric drifts caressing memories He weaves dreams of comfort of love and friendship racing rainbow wheels warp speed being carried by loved ones And even though the sun has now returned he still smiles from his room Because he knows there will be other clouds, returning him to the happy moments *** July 26, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Date: 7/31/2017 1:33:00 AM
Definitely evident here on how well you write together. Brilliant work, guys!
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Date: 7/28/2017 7:17:00 AM
Such a lovely collaboration, Darren and Chris, will miss both of you:(
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Date: 7/26/2017 5:41:00 PM
what a wonderful collaboration and I know Darren will have written his part from the heart - get those rainbow wheels rolling on your chariot my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2017 3:11:00 PM
What a terrific collaboration guys...bravo
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