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Rainbow Light

Shafts of rainbow light Poke through the surrounding trees, The snow underfoot, Just birdsong breaks the silence, The woods fill me with magic. For Carolyn’s Forest Lights contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2012 6:20:00 AM

Good morning Jack, stopping by to wish you a happy fathers day..also to read the rainbow light...always..pd

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/21/2012 7:37:00 AM

My favorite in this contest..congrats Jack. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/20/2012 3:48:00 PM

the magic comes through in your poem! congrats on your win!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/19/2012 10:43:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jack! Each line is beautiful. I can hear the birds singing. Blessings and Love, Rhonda

John Freeman

Date: 5/19/2012 9:09:00 PM

Another greaat write and creative Jack. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/19/2012 6:25:00 PM

Nicely put, Jack. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/19/2012 3:56:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2012 2:13:00 PM

My fav line is the birdsong breaks the silence...What a great write and scene! Congrats, Jack! :) Gwendolen

David Williams

Date: 5/19/2012 12:32:00 PM

Jack congrats on your win..David

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2012 10:38:00 AM

Indeed, this photo does look like a "magical" place, doesn't it, Jack? Wonderfully imagery. Alexa and I congratulate you on your win! Love, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2012 11:11:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and a beautiful poem that is sure to do well in the contest Jack.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2012 8:32:00 AM

Wow Jack i know now i'll not get a first, but who cares this is a brilliant poem, just glad i'm in the same contest, Carolyn will love this and so do I. harry

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/13/2012 4:06:00 PM

This is an excellent write my friend! Outstanding poem in every way Jack! You painted a perfect picture with your descriptive words! Great Work!!

John Freeman

Date: 5/13/2012 3:52:00 PM

Best of wishes on this one Jack, beautiful photo for inspiration. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2012 2:53:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Good luck.I especially like the first line...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara