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Rainbow Girl

rainbow girl her heart glistens like a prism compassion, wisdom and love always offered to a needy friend when others seem to abandon when there are no rays of hope beaming from above I take solace in her comforting words her humility is astonishing a friend who has only recently entered my life and yet she makes time when a friendly voice can brighten a day she doesn’t realize how much she offers to others standing out like an opal on desert sand magical friend turns frowns to smiles how can I reciprocate for the lift she provides iridescent, a star that surpasses all others gratitude does not seem to be enough rainbow girl stands at my side as I near the end thousands of miles between us, but just a phone call away resurrecting struggling souls -- her forte her worth is far more than a pot of gold
*Dedicated to a special Soup friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/14/2011 7:28:00 PM
I am pleased to see a win for you with this Carolyn, i loved the opal on the desert sand line..yours Joe.
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Date: 10/7/2011 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Iridescent" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2011 12:08:00 AM
I'm just guessing but from my experience it sounds like Carol. It is so wonderful to have such a great friend, it can make such a difference, but know you have more than one. Take care Lee
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Date: 10/5/2011 6:27:00 PM
special people linger longer, helping hands for men and mice, light the way a little stronger, just another part of paradise, "have faith"
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Date: 9/21/2011 6:56:00 PM
I have a couple "Rainbow Friends" I like the message,flow,and structure of your poem. When I write on paper, it looks much like this. I mean the shape of the verses(my handwriting is for the birds though) NICE job CD
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Date: 9/15/2011 11:03:00 PM
I think i know who this wonderful lady is. ARe the initials D.A.? it's so good that you have her, Carolyn. well, I am going off soon and I'm thinking of seeing a late movie at the dollar theater! Have a nice weekend coming soon. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:52:00 AM
A great tribute to your friend Carolyn.Wonderful poem.Best wishes.
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:39:00 AM
Lovely tribute to A, my friend
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Date: 9/11/2011 9:15:00 PM
Such a beautiful verse Carolyn, I hope this special person knows who he/she is. I'm sur your dear friendship is appreciated too. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 9/11/2011 5:35:00 PM
This is a true display of appreciation and mutual respect to your friend! I would be honored if someone has written me such a poem as this for me! This is sweet Carolyn!!
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Date: 9/11/2011 5:05:00 PM
Great to have a special friend. Do I know her? Love, daver
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Date: 9/11/2011 4:51:00 PM
Heartwarming.....how wonderful that you have found each other!!
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Date: 9/11/2011 4:47:00 PM
this is really nice
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Date: 9/11/2011 4:42:00 PM
a beautiful write, true friends are a rare commodity, love the feeling in this, uplifting on this windy night in england
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