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Rainbow Girl

What a pretty girl... Walking on the eyes of me Smiling as the rain comes down She is my rainbow... May the sun stay here a while So I can touch her and smile In her company I blow bubbles in the air And I stare and watch her climb Down the firmament As her foot reaches the land I lay in awe on the sand Briefly there's a grey Cloud that's jealous of my love So he calls a thunderstorm But I patiently Cry until the drummers leave ...butterflies sing on my sleeve Dancing down she comes Dressed in colors of the world Waiving at the land and sky Flirting with my eye How can I not love her, she Kisses everything I see What a pretty girl... Walking on the eyes of me Smiling as the rain comes down She is my rainbow... May the sun stay here a while So I can touch her and smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/18/2011 11:08:00 AM
Very captivating, I like it!
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Date: 7/29/2011 12:21:00 AM
Love dances in this lovely verse. Poems of love are so wonderful. Enjoyed this so much.
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:23:00 AM
I LOVE this one, Johnny. Not sure I know sedoka although maybe I did it a long time ago for a contest? Is just one stanza a sedoka and you have done a series of them here. Truly this is one of my favorites of your poetry!
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:12:00 AM
Very creative. These could easily be the lyrics to a song by someone like Neil Young. Well done! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 7/17/2011 1:46:00 PM
Tender writing....well done! You asked me if I was in politics....no. I have been keeping in contact with my reps lately though. Sending emails trying to get my opinions out there. It is the least I can do. (:-}
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Date: 7/16/2011 8:02:00 PM
very light and airy Johnny.. a sweet refreshing piece luv.. appreciate your wonderful comments on my poetry..always welcome ... enjoy your words as well luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 4:38:00 PM
You capture the romance with such vivid pictures - a great verse.
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:21:00 PM
ah, such vivid emotion lovely write. Truly.
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