Rainbow

Dazzling debut - sunlit mist after the rain every color true

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Edward Mccall

Date: 6/7/2017 8:38:00 AM

A sweet little haiku and yes I have seen those colors.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2017 2:07:00 PM

very lovely!!

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/30/2017 3:36:00 PM

Thank You Andrea :) Glad you liked this !

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/26/2017 6:49:00 AM

Lenna, your haikus are 'dazzling' . . . I still remember the amazing 'butterfly' one you published recently:) Amitiés

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/26/2017 9:12:00 AM

Thank You Anne-Marie, that is so nice of you to say and I'm glad you like it :)

Darren White

Date: 5/26/2017 12:49:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, Lenna :) All these colors, gotta love them!

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/26/2017 9:10:00 AM

Good morning Darren, Thank you and yes, "all the colors of the rainbow".

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/25/2017 2:19:00 PM

Nice haiku, Lenna:)

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/26/2017 9:09:00 AM

Hi Daniel, Thank You kindly :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/25/2017 11:26:00 AM

It is always a magical experience for me to see a rainbow on the sky and I have been fortunate to see a double rainbow on many different occasions. Your poem is as beautiful as these rainbows my friend. Really nice Lenna. I am always happy when I see you have posted something new.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/25/2017 12:22:00 PM

I agree with you Chris, rainbows hold a kind of mystic sense. Double rainbows are always a treat. Thank You for your sweet comment, and always being so kind and supportive. You are a gem :)