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Rainbow

Whispers of mist lie deathly white, shifting in the early morning light; the night jar pipes his haunting tune, so soon to rue the waning of the moon. The sun shines brightly now, and rain showers scatter o'er the rough terrain. God's feather'd creatures start to sing, the songbirds warble out their greeting. But now a gift far sweeter for the telling, a soft array of colors gently swelling; seven hues with radiant splendor fair o'erarching all do clearly shimmer there. O limpid arc of light, fleeting and brief! you bring joy as we behold you, every leaf and bough and field and mountain glen exults to taste your beauty once again!

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Date: 5/9/2016 7:26:00 AM
Really beautiful Keith. Great flow and image filled words.
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Date: 5/6/2016 8:31:00 AM
Keith. "Feathered creatures start to sing". Delightful like the masters. What a pleasure to read dear friend. I' m vowing to write again. Love you, Kathy
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/6/2016 4:43:00 PM
So lovely to hear from you again Kathryn!!! ...and thanks so much for your sweet review. Looking forward to new writes from you! Best wishes Keith
Date: 5/6/2016 6:24:00 AM
A pictorial poem... Enjoyed reading....Regards.....
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Date: 5/6/2016 4:43:00 PM
Many thanks Probir... much appreciated. Keith
Date: 5/5/2016 6:59:00 PM
A fairytale of shimmering lights and stars and sprinkles. Serenity
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Date: 5/6/2016 4:45:00 PM
Such a sweet review! Thank you so much Kelli... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 5/5/2016 6:01:00 PM
you've captured the beauty and magic of a rainbow very well here, keith! it's been a very long time since i've seen one and that's a shame...
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Date: 5/6/2016 4:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Ilene! A special rainbow to you too... Hugs, Keith
Date: 5/5/2016 5:40:00 PM
absolutely beautiful imagery Keith - recently I wrote a simple poem also on rainbows - they always make me smile:-) hugs jan xx
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/5/2016 5:47:00 PM
Thanks Jan! I'll be over to check out your rainbow piece soon... much appreciated. Keith

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