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Below is the poem entitled Rainbow which was written by poet Jane Bowen. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Dark clouds filtering sun rays
Amongst their gray dull fluff
Waiting for an end to come
Ever lasting journey of the sun
Relaxed we take in the show
Of a vibrant elusive rainbow

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  1. Date: 8/8/2009 6:59:00 AM
    Love the line " ever lasting journey of the sun" ..... takes me to a wonderful place! Nicely done, Jane! :)

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 2:57:00 PM
    Another day we are blessed to be here reading and writing poetry. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Jane. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 11:33:00 AM
    some great phrases. where you been? John H Loving III

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 11:24:00 AM
    This is pure beauty my friend..wonderfully written with color....good work.

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 10:58:00 AM
    Jane I greatly enjoyed this short poem - wonderful penmanship - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 10:45:00 AM
    Rainbows are so beautiful, and a delight to read in a poem, a warm welcome to the Soup Jane>>James