Rainbow

Dark clouds filtering sun rays Amongst their gray dull fluff Waiting for an end to come Ever lasting journey of the sun Relaxed we take in the show Of a vibrant elusive rainbow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2016 12:28:00 AM

well done Jane B. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/19/2015 12:44:00 AM

JANE, I like this very much SKAT

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/8/2009 6:59:00 AM

Love the line " ever lasting journey of the sun" ..... takes me to a wonderful place! Nicely done, Jane! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/7/2009 2:57:00 PM

Another day we are blessed to be here reading and writing poetry. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Jane. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/7/2009 11:33:00 AM

some great phrases. where you been? John H Loving III

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/7/2009 11:24:00 AM

This is pure beauty my friend..wonderfully written with color....good work.

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/7/2009 10:58:00 AM

Jane I greatly enjoyed this short poem - wonderful penmanship - God Bless, MJ

James Fraser

Date: 8/7/2009 10:45:00 AM

Rainbows are so beautiful, and a delight to read in a poem, a warm welcome to the Soup Jane>>James