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Rain, Sun, Maybe None

I’ve seen sun And I’ve seen rain The symbol of fun And the symbol of pain Mighty, but lightly, It shines on those below A symbol of a new chance Perhaps I’d love it so Gloomy clouds then loom around Restless in the sky And then with a booming sound The clouds begin to cry The sun, a great light! Teases others down below It shines off just to spite Those who do not glow The water dissolves all harm For those who dance in it From every mother’s arm A child's spark is lit ‘There can be no sun If there is no rain’ …But why not? They’re nature, not emotions I can see them just the same

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Date: 5/7/2023 11:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Luna Schwartz
Date: 5/8/2023 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your welcoming.
Date: 5/7/2023 4:31:00 PM
love your writing here, and welcome to Soup, Luna.
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Luna Schwartz
Date: 5/7/2023 4:50:00 PM
Thank you for your kind welcome, Andrea.
Date: 5/6/2023 4:10:00 AM
Life is full of contrasts and you have penned it beautifully in this poem, Lina. Welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Luna Schwartz
Date: 5/6/2023 7:56:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome.
Date: 5/5/2023 6:15:00 PM
Love this Luna, nicely done :)
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Luna Schwartz
Date: 5/5/2023 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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