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Rain Spider

At the stump of the fig tree where sweetness and fragrance have long departed a rain spider has built a nest of autumn-dried leaves covered with a blanket of delicate silk. I stand and watch the little spiders coming out to play in smooth fur jackets - first, a game of tag and then a fencing game with slender long legs. Soon they will spread out and scurry around in the hunt for food; raising neck hairs and bring shrieks of terror as they intimidate nervous children and wives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/24/2013 7:50:00 PM
David, congratulations on your win, lovely moment and good contrast!
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Date: 6/23/2013 7:38:00 AM
congrats on your win ;}
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/24/2013 12:16:00 AM
Thank You, Debbie... David
Date: 6/21/2013 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your grand win friend David :)Your poem is awesome :) cheers!!
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/24/2013 12:18:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my poem, Maria... David
Date: 6/20/2013 6:43:00 PM
A charming vision. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie. I enjoyed reading your winning entry, too. Congratulations! David
Date: 6/20/2013 6:22:00 PM
Oh, this is great. congrats on your win..well deserved. BG
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 9:47:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara. Congratulations to you, too, David
Date: 6/20/2013 4:22:00 PM
David this is excellent. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/25/2013 12:21:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. Your comments are very encouraging... Cheers, David
Date: 6/20/2013 11:49:00 AM
Expressive and creative winning work..Congrats on your second place win..Sara
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 9:45:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I appreciate your kind comments and good wishes... David
Date: 6/20/2013 10:55:00 AM
Well done. Congrats on the win.
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 9:44:00 PM
Thank you, Carol. I enjpyed your winning entry as well. Cheers, David
Date: 6/20/2013 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations. I really like this one. Love, Joyce
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 8:09:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce. Glad to share the rostrum with you and all the other entrants... David
Date: 6/20/2013 12:14:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my competition, I enjoyed reading all the entries so much. Yours was outstanding. SuZ
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 12:40:00 AM
Thank you, SuZ. I appreciate your kind appreciation of my poem... David
Date: 6/14/2013 12:33:00 AM
wow, I think it should do great in the spider contest. The spider was well described.
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David De La Croes
Date: 6/14/2013 1:06:00 AM
I am glad you like it, Andrea. Thanks for your visit... David
Date: 5/28/2013 5:47:00 PM
This is great..I especially love the first part. BG
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/29/2013 12:39:00 AM
I appreciate your visit and comments, Barbara. Have a great day! David
Date: 5/28/2013 1:04:00 PM
- A magnificent building - spider web - a nice poem David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/29/2013 12:38:00 AM
Thank your for your visit and comment, Anne-Lise. Be well, David

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