Rain Song

rhythmic dance of rain a soft ballad enthralls thee....... grateful performance

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Jared Pickett

Date: 6/3/2010 9:40:00 AM

I love to dance to the rhythm of the rain song.... I LOVE rain...... Probably why I shower twice a day and love the beach..... I like to be wet with my shirt off....HeHe.... Good work my friend.....:JP]

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/3/2010 6:18:00 AM

Nice imagery in your Haiku, Rick! And thank you for your congrats on my win! Wish you a nice day...Gert

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/3/2010 12:37:00 AM

glad you cannot enter your own contest Rick, ahah. this is awesome stuff thanks for the opportunity harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/2/2010 8:55:00 PM

Well penned haiku with nice images, Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 8:06:00 PM

such a shame u cannot enter your own contest before it closed as this is a wonderful Haiku..Rick.. enjoyed its energy .. guess my "Kaledioscope" did not do it for u this contest ..well will keep trying.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"