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Rain-Soaked Shadows

Silently shadows Gather under the rain-soaked Leaves of berry tree Are you coming tonight dear The air from rains smells musky ______________________________________________ August 5, 2016

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Date: 8/12/2016 6:29:00 AM
Such a lovely short, tells it all, romantic poem. God Bless. D.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/12/2016 12:42:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/10/2016 10:47:00 AM
Very nicely done Probir, congratulations...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/10/2016 9:02:00 PM
thank you...
Date: 8/8/2016 8:29:00 AM
I am new here and was unfamiliar with the Tanka. Thanks for showing me what can be done with such a short form; I feel like you're distilling the essence. Agnes
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/8/2016 9:59:00 AM
Thank you ... You are gifted with the fine intelligence for appreciation ... the credit is attributable more to that faculty of yours than my writing ... Be that as it may, somehow I feel poetry is beautified more by fewer words ...
Date: 8/6/2016 11:16:00 AM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/7/2016 5:04:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/5/2016 1:22:00 PM
You have painted a beautiful scene in only a few words. I am sure the wait is worthwhile. Well done.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/5/2016 9:57:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/5/2016 10:38:00 AM
The scene is set and she will be there for poetry and romanticism for her await! Wonderful my friend, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/5/2016 12:08:00 PM
Thank you ...

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