Rain Or Sunshine

Rain makes me wet I become cold and weak I cant even trade my takes I have to make a wish That the sun may come again Sunshine makes me sweat I become hot and weak I cant even trade my trends I have to kneel and pray for rain

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Len Gasun

Date: 12/4/2013 9:35:00 AM

An awesome poem which i enjoyed to read this evening my dear friend Rodger. This reminds me of extreme weather. A brilliant write indeed. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank u so much as well for your precious time to read and leave inspiring comments on my poem. My great honor to know that u included me as one of your faves. So glad to meet one new great poet at soup like u. Have a great day. Keep on writing. love and big hugs, Leonora

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/1/2013 10:54:00 AM

Oh the irony of the weather!! Great job!

Weston Gregory

Date: 11/30/2013 10:42:00 AM

this made me smile... a true reflection of the two side of a natural phenomenon.. i detect a typo in the first verse "my could be may"... nice poem