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Rain or Shine

The rain is singing Soaking the leafy terrain With splashy songs of puddles The sun is smiling Spreading a golden kindness Through its glazed misty snuggles

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/23/2024 11:11:00 PM

Nice Sedoka, Smita. It has a nice rhythm to it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 2/26/2024 10:11:00 AM

Thank you, Bill for your kind words!

Christina Bowring

Date: 2/23/2024 7:04:00 AM

Love the imagery in this delightful poem dear Smita. ‘ The rain is singing’ - such a lovely line and makes me think of rainfall and its orchestrated rhythm. The last line is enchanting. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you for a great weekend :)

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2024 11:27:00 AM

Thank you, Christina for your inspiring feedback. Much appreciated!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/22/2024 6:30:00 PM

I never saw a sun smile but the way you describe it it sound amazing, dear poet

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2024 11:27:00 AM

The rain sings and the sun smiles for me :). Loved reading your sweet comments!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/22/2024 2:41:00 PM

Two images elegantly captured, Smita--much enjoyed the contrast in the poem as it turns to shine from rain.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2024 11:26:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and the uplifting feedback Vijay!