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Rain In the Wild

Birds scatter in the air as they head back to their nests Rivers begin to create beautiful circular waves The smell of rain fills the air once more, as droplets of rain come down to embrace the ground The jungle is alive again in the endless rhythm created by raindrops and the earth

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2014 8:23:00 AM

- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... - I enjoy reading yours - well done Teddy !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/10/2014 8:58:00 AM

Thank you very much for your sweet and kind applause Anne Lise! ^_^ Have a Happy Weekend too!!! ^_^ <3

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/10/2014 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem. I can imagine how important rain can be to some countries were they wait and long for it.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/10/2014 8:04:00 AM

Thank you for your applause Brenda! ^_^ Our ancestors had celebrations and festivals, marking the onset of rains. Today, we still have some medicine men doing divinations, to invite rain when dry-spells have stayed for long.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/10/2014 6:00:00 AM

Enjoyed the write with a fine take, Teddy, congrats

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/10/2014 7:54:00 AM

I'm so sorry Dr. Ram Mehta. There was probably a network error... Thanks once again for applauding my work, and for your morale support. Regards, Teddy.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/10/2014 7:51:00 AM

Hi Jan. Thank you so much for enjoying my work, and applauding it! ^_^

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2014 4:29:00 AM

wonderful imagery Teddy this is a delightful read:-) many congrats on your win. hugs jan xxx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/10/2014 7:52:00 AM

Hi Jan. Thank you so much for enjoying my work, and applauding it! ^_^

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2014 2:39:00 AM

Congratulations my dear poet friend Teddy. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/10/2014 3:24:00 AM

I am greatly honored and glad that I have won this contest! I am looking forward to sharing more in the future! ^_^ Regards, Teddy.