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Rain From Heaven

I kissed the rain As it caressed my aches and pains Darkened skies, as the wind passes me by Wandering among the gravestones Wondering where my final place shall be Footprints in the earth softly whisper, soon, soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/9/2015 3:46:00 PM
Dear Paul, Love how you blend life and death, wandering amongst the gravestones, wondering where my final place shall be, GREAT LINES, my friend Paul outstanding piece the whole thing has so much power to it I'm thilled that I went back to read it, and found it, cheri needs pic though lol
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/9/2015 8:40:00 PM
Thanks Cherl
Date: 5/24/2013 8:06:00 PM
Oh....no. Not soon soon! Lovely write, but it left me sad...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/9/2015 8:43:00 PM
Free tickles after every sad poem!! I may write dark and sad, but I want everyone smiling in the end!!!
Date: 5/24/2013 10:41:00 AM
- Lovely described, Arthur! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/9/2015 8:42:00 PM
Thanks Anne, I missed the comments on this poem, but better late than never!!! xoxo
Date: 5/24/2013 10:19:00 AM
this could be written on your epitaph, it is that good...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/9/2015 8:41:00 PM
Thanks Harry, hopefully that wont be for a few more days!!! :)
Date: 5/23/2013 8:28:00 PM
Nice write my friend, i love the light rain. ...Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/9/2015 8:41:00 PM
Somehow I missed the comments on this poem, thank you
Date: 5/23/2013 7:38:00 PM
This is somehow peaceful...I enjoyed...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2013 10:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Donna

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