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Rain Drops Falling

Rain drops falling from the sky Puddles are sure formed I desire to splash in them Surely a bit charmed I stand under rain Beautiful the water is But is quite inane
Form Seguidilla Entrant into Black Eyed Susan's "any new poem 12 lines or under" contest 12/19/2012

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Date: 12/21/2012 10:30:00 PM
It dramatically illustrates the powerful of a mature mind and what it must be a poetical sense. Excellent!
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