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Each time you drink some water you are drinking the essence of the stars all water is formed by

dying stars and stars being born.

It started high up in the clouds, the moisture balling together until it became a perfect tear drop hovering then falling down, gaining speed. Bumping into others amalgamating, spinning dropping ever downwards. Landing with large splash on a leaf and trickling, running ever down. Joining still as it flows on over the edge to the ground. The rain drop fell into a puddle and spread out reflecting the sky. Glistening, sparkling and pulsing It follows the contours of the land giving life to all as it passes by, relentlessly advancing with glee. Not over yet, it flowed into a lake now a vast body of water it continues onwards, ever onwards. One day it will return to the sky. That's another story.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/3/2014 10:06:00 AM
video class if you read this I can not reply to e-mails for some reason the answer is yes and ty for wanting to use this hugs
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for letting us use this poem!!! When we are done with the video we can send you a link as well. Thanks, Video Class
Date: 11/25/2014 12:34:00 AM
Brilliant work!! I really enjoyed reading this! Very refreshing and beautifully written :) keep up the good work!
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:51:00 AM
ty Megan nice to met you hugs
Date: 11/24/2014 5:54:00 PM
another story YES. then you have to do the evaporation thing!! this is wonderful, Shadow and I am glad I found this one that I had missed the other day!
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:50:00 AM
ty Andrea pleased you like it hugs
Date: 11/19/2014 6:25:00 AM
love how you penned this linda very beautifully painted piece dear friend bless you pal
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Date: 11/19/2014 7:41:00 PM
ty old pal much appreciated hugs
Date: 11/18/2014 2:03:00 PM
Dear Shadow, never before had I thought of how similar our lives are to raindrops. This is a stunningly beautiful description and I love the way you describe the "return to the sky" that we'll all have one day. Another fave from a favorite writer. Just wish my health was better so I could read all of your work, dear. You are so talented! Forgive me. Blessings to you, Carolyn
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Date: 11/19/2014 7:39:00 PM
sorry to hear you are not well Carolyn I hope it is nothing serious. ty for your very kind review hugs

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