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Rain has rinsed the night of color and falls with some restraint A day designed to say goodbye cannot deny the scent of grief It's no wonder sleepless nights prevail upon the hint of a summer storms as if to keep the heart alive and smooth the day before our eyes Just slight enough to temper dark To let us swim into the night with something new that isn't yet quite defined to understand Enough to litter sidewalks, gutters, eaves. To leave a trace of sailing leaves, confetti trails To veil the past and distant hills beneath the somber sky Slanted silver catches light washing tremors from the wind A petrichor of sweet perfume blooms again to sweeten earth and birth a stream of memories As we woke to dread the day, somehow, we were not surprised, to hear the sound of rain again She always said, a gentle rain will come to soothe the earth and sky to quench the soul, restore the heart with colors of the afterlife ________________________________________________________ 6/7/16 For "Contest: Rain, Rain Come My Way" Sponsored by binibining P.INk

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Date: 7/6/2016 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie:) Rain does bring memories and don't know why but many times it is of those who were very close to us and now are no more...
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Date: 7/5/2016 1:07:00 PM
Hi Carrie :)! Big congrats on your win! By some miracle, I was able to put in 11 winners, and I am so glad this happened! Your poem made me wonder as to who "she" was , and that intrigued me. I am thinking could be a grandmother? My favorite stanza is the 4th, for me rain was so alive there. Thank you so much for entering my contest :)!
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Date: 6/8/2016 7:59:00 PM
I love the rain and your poem expresses the beauty of it. I hope to see this in the top winners Carrie. #7 ; )
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Date: 6/8/2016 1:29:00 PM
"To quench the soul, restore the heart", Great line. Best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:20:00 AM
Ok, I like each stanza on its own merit, and you have a way of saying " simple" beautifully, but it has me zigzaging on the spot ? the " us" then the " she" are leaving me directionless, ...and it does lean towards lengthy, .... I feel this could have been shorter, and perhaps personalised has a " rain memory" ....Ian
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