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Is god crying up there in heaven or are the angels shedding tears. mother earth is weeping at our folly And that petrichor feelings in the air ! Man's crimes could make a god cry and angels shed real tears. Mother earth is cracking up from fracking as the rain begins to fall lament the missing ozone and the falling of acid rain and weep as global warming causes climate change oh lord, its so raining in my heart . 03062016 comp entry

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Date: 8/15/2016 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Stephen, prayers to God our Lord ! Hug Eve
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/16/2016 8:52:00 AM
cheers eve great comp
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/15/2016 6:10:00 PM
Andrea is right the word should be it is as it's
Date: 8/15/2016 5:04:00 PM
Stephen, sadly written yet an honest write..congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo.
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Date: 6/3/2016 9:07:00 PM
oh, I really like this, Stephen WE all will be crying for earth and for ourselves as well when the calamity comes. In case the judge is like me with things, put "it's" in that last line!!
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/16/2016 8:53:00 AM
missed the correction would have done it seem to have another poem there now lol
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 6/4/2016 1:26:00 AM
many thanks andrea always nice to have you comment cheers stephen
Date: 6/3/2016 11:58:00 AM
Nice.."Lament...ozone". i like this line. So many ways to interpret rainfall.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 6/3/2016 3:33:00 PM
many thanks I do wonder when I write a poem it go's where it takes me stephen

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