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Rain is here, water everywhere, Rainbow is seen up in the sky, I wish i could fly so high. Eat hot things to keep tummy fill, Do not get wet else you fall ill Make paper boat, in the rain it float, Have fun in the rain,ignore all pain!!

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Date: 3/17/2016 9:00:00 AM
Greetings Neha. I felt like going out into the rain, after I read your piece..... Congrats for having your wonderful piece featured in the Poetry Soup home page!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:06:00 AM
Thanks to all who comments on the poem, this is really motivational...thanks for response and wishes....!! :)
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:39:00 PM
Hi Neha,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:16:00 AM
Neha, Great write , WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/4/2016 6:30:00 AM
This simple poem is a lot of fun. I like it,Neha. It reminds me of being young and playing in the rain.
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