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Rain

The sky’s deep blue eyes Wounded by the wandering storm Sheds the white mucus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 10/7/2009 2:00:00 AM
AWESOME haiku, dear Oluwaseun. lainie
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Date: 9/28/2008 1:56:00 PM
Vivid imagery carries your thoughts in this one. Nice use of this concise form. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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