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Rain

Water rises up, laden the skies, clouded sight; tears shower the soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/13/2014 8:51:00 PM
rain and tears . They always make for good metaphors of each other, Hija
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Date: 10/22/2014 3:31:00 PM
I love the rain Hija, and your fine Haiku reminds why I do, James :)
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Date: 7/10/2014 11:42:00 AM
Hija, it's a good feeling poem, love it..Linda
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/11/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thanks for loving it, Linda! & thanks for stopping by.. :))
Date: 6/28/2014 9:56:00 PM
Nice images with nicely crafted haiku, hija
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 6/28/2014 11:05:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Ram! I treasure your words.
Date: 6/28/2014 3:47:00 PM
Beautifully written Haiku, my friend! Well done.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 6/28/2014 8:11:00 PM
Grateful here for your appreciation, Pandita! :)

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